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Poetry - Various Genres => Love => Topic started by: Don J. Lester on July 16, 2008, 11:39:26 am



Title: A Pink Rose
Post by: Don J. Lester on July 16, 2008, 11:39:26 am
A Pink Rose

You blossomed like a fresh rose
your fragrance enveloped my soul
my nose lead, forgetting the thorns,
wilted petals fall, now holding a stem.

Now in the mist of yesterday,
transformed into illusions for tomorrow.

I held you close to absorb your fragrance
but in the shadows of those moments
the rain washed away the aroma
leaving a heart ache in thorns.

Now in the mist of yesterday,
transformed into illusions for tomorrow.

Dreams vanished like clouds in the sky
days and nights have become dry,
my heart still burns from the thorns
as I pluck them from yesterdays heart ache.

Remembering the mist of yesterday
transformed into illusions for tomorrow.
 

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Title: Re: A Pink Rose
Post by: Marie on July 20, 2008, 05:08:59 pm
Hi Don,

Absolutely beautiful...............loved the beauty of each detail.  Excellent job!

hugs friend, Marie :)


Title: Re: A Pink Rose
Post by: missouri10 on March 02, 2012, 09:34:16 pm
Nice poem , i really love it.