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« on: April 16, 2008, 07:50:39 pm »


Through ice and snow I search for you,
amoung valleys and streams I wade.
But your face I never see,
except in dreams and fantasy.

I fly to the heights of the Milky Way,
across the stars and vastness of space.
To worlds unknown and places unseen,
but I only see you in my dreams!
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« Reply #1 on: April 16, 2008, 08:55:32 pm »

Hi Rebecca.

A good write. Heartfelt.
Good imagery, flow and tone.
Lovely depth of feeling.
Good word choice, alliteration
and assonance. Well penned.

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« Reply #2 on: April 20, 2008, 04:20:39 pm »

Hello Rebecca,

Lovely poem.......a most enjoyable read.  Nice to meet you also.

Hugs friend, Marie Smiley
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