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Shelley
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« on: April 16, 2008, 08:59:14 pm » |
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Hi Rebecca.
A lovely write. Deep expression of
emotion. Good imagery, flow, rhyme
and tone. Nice simile. Very nice descriptives.
Good word choice, nice alliteration
and assonance. You express your love
for this special person beautifully in
this piece.
Shelley
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