You came into my life....

[RebeccaWiles]

YOU CAME INTO MY LIFE....

You came into my life, like a star in the heavens.

You lit up my heart, with your burning eyes.

I'd cross the world to be with you.

I'd travel the midnight darkened skies.



The stars have always held my gaze.

But now that you are here with me,

your brightness far outshines the stars.

For you are the only one I see.



You touch my soul like no other.

Your whispering voice melts my heart.

The universe smiles down upon me,

for now I know I got a part.



You are the only one my heart cries out for.

There is no other, like you for me.

Our love will go on never-ending,

even past eternity!

[Shelley]

Hi Rebecca.

A lovely write. Deep expression of
emotion. Good imagery, flow, rhyme
and tone. Nice simile. Very nice descriptives.
Good word choice, nice alliteration
and assonance. You express your love
for this special person beautifully in
this piece.

Shelley

[Marie]

Hi Rebecca,

A beautiful poem of love for that special person.  Very much enjoyed.

hugs, Marie