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Two butterflies-two souls

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Ilze
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« on: January 19, 2007, 03:54:09 pm »

Butterflies dancing
In the symphony of the wind,
Whirling and whirling
Under the rays of the sun.

They are dancing there,
In joy and harmony
White and pure
As two souls bonded together.

Enjoying the warmth
Given by the sun,
Given by each other
Just from being together.

They know no time,
Yet they are children of it,
They know no boundaries
To their endless love.
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« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2007, 09:28:53 pm »

A lovely write. Beautiful imagery, flow
and tone. Very nice expression of feeling
and metaphor. Nice descriptives. A much
enjoyed read.

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« Reply #2 on: January 20, 2007, 10:55:41 am »

Hi Ilze,

Love this poem........so soft just as the butterfly.  Great job with expressions. 

smiles and hugs friend, Marie Smiley
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