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The water dweller


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« on: January 23, 2007, 04:10:27 am »

 
What brings forth a messenger
clouded in fates’ ancient splendor,
to serve me in this grieving
Ask me not the cause why spring delays;
and keeps her buds.
All that wounds I shall heal, -
hast, thou made departing
on the lawless tormented sorrow.
Now proceeding—the purge inflames,
rebellious to change.
Foundations’ laid awaste;
’Twas the ravish’d tongues did mourn
to shape the sphere of those fallen brave,
Blooming from a feast of youth and pride.
Drenched I hath become in punishment, -
were my prayers the sails of my words;
and oft a boat does pass without its owner,
been called beneath the oceans surface
as I in fear am called beneath mine.
And hollow grounds do become the tomb I made;
innocence no longer been the child,
rest upon my hopes and dreams
and find only thinness where warmth
doth not lie, deserving to be cold.
I see her now at the rippled waters edge, -
seeking to breathe me whole
and in my heart unknowingly I have wept;
but know that hope is awoken in such a place.
What I thought was gone could ne’er die
she was my sea and my boat sailed beneath her, -
and I took flight not knowing I had no land
been the water dweller. 
 
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« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2007, 10:30:49 am »

Hi Red,

A lovely yet sad write.  I loved the style of your imagery and expressions very much.  A well crafted read and a great job. 

hugs friend, Marie Smiley
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